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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Aug 31, 2008 23:37:35 GMT -5
A new fanfiction out here, WALL-E is quite intelligent in here, because he really is..Alright, here we go!
Chapter 1: reminiscence
I am WALL-E, one of the only WALL-E robots remaining from the Great Shutdown, a mass shutdown of all WALL-E units, I survived, thanks to a friend, who turned me back on. I had lived my life alone, 700 years to be exact, and I'm trying to piece together the world's history, and trying to find out my Directive, the job that all robots do, I've found a tape, it says on the title, "Hello Dolly!" it was a musical, I noticed that people seem to show some sort of magic, when they touch, with their hands, I'm guessing that it's a sign of affection, holding hands, I wish I could've talked about the subject with another robot, or at least seen what this hand holding meant! It's painful, being alone, but at least I have a friend, who reactivated me, his name is Hal, he is a insect, the only other lifeform here, other than the plant I found. Until I met EVE, I was alone, she had the concept of love, and holding hands in her programing, I just had to pull it out of her library of knowledge she held, I knew I was in love with her, but I wasn't sure if she reciprocated, or even liked me, sometimes, she was rather annoyed at me, which made me unhappy, I knew I was going to have her love, and I ended up saving the people who once lived on Earth, now I'm trying to recreate the world they once lived in..
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Post by vanessajoyce on Aug 31, 2008 23:59:01 GMT -5
Cool! Thanks for posting this!
I like this because I've never really thought of how WALL-E would talk if he could just "talk". And if someone asked him to sum up his life, this would probably be how he would do it if he could talk "human" so well.
Looking forward to chapter 2!
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Post by Callandor on Sept 1, 2008 0:12:00 GMT -5
Very nice kingdom <3 I love this new idea of Hal turning wall-e back on <3 Id love to see how he pulls that off ;D And idk the last sentence kind of seems like, it runs on :S Like maybe you were rushing it or something. But anyways i still enjoyed it <33 I NEEDS CHAPTER 2 NOWS!!  |
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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Sept 1, 2008 0:15:25 GMT -5
Very nice kingdom <3 I love this new idea of Hal turning wall-e back on <3 Id love to see how he pulls that off ;D And idk the last sentence kind of seems like, it runs on :S Like maybe you were rushing it or something. But anyways i still enjoyed it <33 I NEEDS CHAPTER 2 NOWS!! I uh...Tried to leave it at a cliffhanger, and chapter 2 is being worked on right now, give me time.. |
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Post by vanessajoyce on Sept 1, 2008 0:19:26 GMT -5
Get used to it, kingdomheartsora . . . once you get a fanbase, they're insatiable. Just ask Mr. Stanton. ;D
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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Sept 1, 2008 0:20:04 GMT -5
Heh, he still hasn't replied to my obessive Emails, he blocked me. ;D
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Post by Callandor on Sept 1, 2008 0:22:44 GMT -5
Whos Mr. Stanton? T_T
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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Sept 1, 2008 0:30:24 GMT -5
Eh....New Chapter!
Chapter 2: EVE
Me, M-O, and EVE are working together to restore Earth, after 700 years of being in space, the humans can return to their home planet. Ever since my Directive ended, I have enough time to be with my love, EVE, she was beautiful, and I'm glad to be with her, especially since we held hands, and had our own proclamation of love, we must be careful, there are bots that are looking to separate us, and destroy me, the Stewards, reprogrammed HAN-S robots, and even AUTO, who turned himself back on, to destroy me for getting the humans back to Earth, he still deems Earth uninhabitable, even after the evidence proves that life is sustainable. He is sort of corrupt, stealing people back on to the ship, he's already taken John.. Mary's been worried sick, she hasn't been able to sleep at night, it makes me sad, if that happened to EVE.. But I can't think such things, or it will happen, I had found a poetry book a few days ago, on my scavenger hunt of history, it was written by Edgar Allen Poe, a old Poet, very sadistic, I thought my favorite poem was Annabel Lee, it kinda reminds me, that eventually, people will leave and never come back, but I can't work it into terms of robots, so I can't say anything more about the subject, soon, me and EVE will become old models, we'd be together forever, I ended up reading his poems for half the day before I heard EVE call "WALL-E!" Waving her arm in the air, such a beautiful woman, so we shall go home together, in our piece of forever.
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Post by vanessajoyce on Sept 1, 2008 0:44:46 GMT -5
Liking this! Can't wait for more.  |
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Post by fastdash9 on Sept 1, 2008 1:47:50 GMT -5
This is a great series! It looks more as if I'm reading WALL-E's journal though, as opposed to seeing him actually tell the story. You could put a date above each entry to simulate that. Just my two cents  Andrew Stanton my friend |
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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Sept 1, 2008 10:20:58 GMT -5
Alright, new chapter (Cue the Final Countdown)
Chapter 3: Tapes.
Well, I went out searching, after my morning recharge, for anything releated to the Earth's past, Mary decided to join, she's also curious what I've found. "Find anything?" She asked. I have no response in my A.I. that could be the answer, so I dropped what I was doing, rolled over to her, and nodded a no, I know what no is, I've seen them in other movies, where it's a sign of compliance, just like nodding your head up and down, yes..Humans must have been very advanced to even think of this, but until I saw a new tape, proving that they can be very advanced, but also be very scary, that was Mary's reaction when I showed her the tape, I haven't really been able to analize it myself, it says on the title "Halloween" but I have no idea what else it is.
After Mary left, fearing that a man would come and threaten her life, I decided to watch the movie with EVE, we got together, and popped in the tape, wow, it was quite disgusting, but it proves that Humans seemed to like these movies, I guess it pumps adrenaline into the human body, giving them a slight boost in courage, faked courage, but still, I think it was more to entertain the humans, rather than scare them. Keeps you on edge.
Well, the next day the Axiom came down, to steal off more people, EVE recharged her lazer, and I told Hal to stay in his Twinkee, or whatever that is he lives in. I wish I could say things naturally, without hand gestures, and say things, but if I don't know them, I can't try to pronunce them, but I've done this for 700 years, so I should be used to it. Oh well, I transformed into a cube, EVE grabbed me, I must feel light to her, she must be super strong, like a superhero! That makes me even more happier to have her in my life!
We finally got to the Axiom, I'd never thought I would be back here, there were people, but they seemed....out of it? I don't know, we should get them off those chairs, I wish a end to those, the people finally lost 100 pounds, and they are back on the seat? No, not gonna allow that to go, we first looked for John, oh, he was near the pool. "I still can't believe we had a pool!" He laughed, he was actually out of his chair, the steward was trying to get him back in the chair, and now the chair was tossed at the Steward, he is now half a steward. "Yoo Hoo!" I called to John, he responded quickly, "WALL-E! Finally you came, AUTO has us trapped here, the Captain is stuck in his old room, so go and help him, I'll get these people out of their chairs!" He said. "o...kay.." I pronunced, I hope that means yes.
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Post by Callandor on Sept 1, 2008 10:47:13 GMT -5
Andrew Stanton my friend Lol sorry, i typed this when i was tired T_T Very awsome KHS!! This is fricken awsome, i love this suspense and Omg references to edgar allan poe <3333333 You my new epicly best friend |
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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Sept 1, 2008 11:01:50 GMT -5
I liked Edgar Allen Poe's stories, it was needed.
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Post by vanessajoyce on Sept 1, 2008 11:47:54 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is great! I thought it was neat how you described WALL-E's reaction to a horror flick. Yeah, probably not his kind of thing. |
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Post by Kingdomheartsora on Sept 1, 2008 11:49:17 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is great! I thought it was neat how you described WALL-E's reaction to a horror flick. Yeah, probably not his kind of thing. Great! I wasn't too sure how to play out his reaction, so I went with what WALL-E could react. |
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