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Post by AMYTHEHEDGEHOGFAN on Aug 15, 2008 11:37:34 GMT -5
This story takes place the same night as Cloverfield, but is a different person's P.O.V.
CHAPTER ONE: It was a dark and quiet night in New York City. Two adult friends, John Williams and Billy Morgenson were in Queens. They were going shopping for John's new baby boy, Charlie, who was born yesterday. John bought sokcs, a lamp, toys, a stroller, and a crib. After buying everything they would need, John started goofing off in front of the camera. This includes sticking his butt out of his pants and breakdancing in the street. "Dude, you are gonna scare your child if he watches this video when he grows up." said Billy. "SHUT UP!" joked John. John and Billy went to walk to John's house but it was after 9pm and the taxis weren't running so they had to walk to his house in Midtown. Around 9:45, they took a break after walking for several miles. "My legs are freaking killing me." said John. "I know." said Billy "We'll be lucky if our legs don't explode before we get there." Then, out of nowhere, all of Manhattan Island began to shake and roaring was heard. "What the heck was that?" asked Billy curiously. Then a dark figure came out from behind the buildings, so John and billy began to run for their lives.
Chapter two coming soon.
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Post by Callandor on Aug 16, 2008 2:07:10 GMT -5
its a good start, I'd like to see more though
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Post by AMYTHEHEDGEHOGFAN on Aug 22, 2008 16:09:27 GMT -5
CHAPTER TWO:
John began cursing. "What the heck is that freakin' gigantic creature?" asked Billy curiously. "I don't know" said John. "But I'd rather not stick around to find out." The two ran to Liberty Harbor. They saw the creature rip off Lady Liberty's head and throw it into the streets. The two ducked for mercy. "Oh, crap!" yelled John. "Holy shoot!" yelled Billy. The two ran to John's house. They saw his wife and 1 day old baby dead. His house was in ruins. John ducked, put his arms over his legs, and tears began seeping down his eyes. "Dude we gotta go now. We're gonna die out here if we don't have a move-on." said Billy. John stood up and stopped crying. The monster came to the neighborhood John lived in and tore the roof off a house. The roof flew and slashed right threw a senior citizen's stomach, killing him. People used bats to break into stores just for shelter.
Chapter three is coming soon so stay tuned.
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Post by Callandor on Aug 24, 2008 21:57:29 GMT -5
nice, but I found a small typo, they ducked for mercy? ;D
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